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Waving goodbye - Haiku

This week's CDHWT episode is about "Mixing it Up".
It means - mixing up the action so the reader does not know if nature is doing the acting or if a human is doing it.

I am always struggling to write according to the rules of these techniques.
Giving it a try here again...


last glance
waving goodbye
grass sways

©Nimi Arora



Credits: Miscanthus (or Susuki)


Prompt by and Shared with-
Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #21 The Technique of Mixing it Up
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2015/12/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-21.html










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