The challenge in Carpe Diem Special #132 is to write a Haiku sense, tone and spirit as
Under a cold
street lamp
I’ve just turned
the corner
© Fuyuko Tomita
And here's my attempt.
Under a cold
street lamp
I’ve just turned
the corner
© Fuyuko Tomita
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| Credits: Japanese Street Lantern (photo © Jim Epler) |
And here's my attempt.
my shadow
shivers on way home
moonlit path
Does it work? I am not very sure... But this is the best I could write...
Prompt by and Shared with-
Carpe Diem Special #132, Fuyuko Tomita's "the corner"
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