Making way...

Carpe Diem Special #127... The haiku written by lio Sogi for inspiration is -

Both grasses and trees
waiting for the moon
dewy evening

© Iio Sogi

The goal is to write a haiku inspired by this. And then use that haiku to write a Troiku.

This is my first attempt at writing a Troiku.

The Haiku written by me -

Lighting moon
light fades away
candle melts

The Troiku -

Lighting moon
big brother smiles
distant warmth

Light fades away
encompassing horizon
Enchanting adieu

Candle melts
eyes await beloved
Tears of wax

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Carpe Diem Special #127, Sogi's third "dewy evening"

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